兔子q 发表于 2017-12-28 16:05:08

雅思写作范文:手机影响读写能力

一些人认为频繁使用电脑和手机对于年轻人的读写能力有负面影响,你认同还是不认同呢?


Task:Some people believe that the increasing use of the computers and the mobile phones has a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skill,do you agree or disagree?

思路分析:在我们日常生活中,年轻人会频繁使用电脑和手机和比人沟通,或者很多年轻人沉迷于电脑和手机游戏,年轻人们把自己的大部分时间都是和手机电脑度过的,阅读和写字时间就会很有限,这个自然会影响年轻人的读写技能。

Sample answer:

  Some educators have warned that the prevalence of mobile phones and the internet has a negative effect on adolescents’ academic ability. I agree with this view.**** Hidden Message *****

  In conclusion, while these electronic devices make the communication much more convenient, I am in the camp that they might affect young people’s academic performance negatively.


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sunx 发表于 2019-10-22 11:03:15

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how to influence the peoples's reading and writing skill

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